I sent the link to our opening to some of my friends who are within our target audience age range to get their feedback and point of view, so we could make adjustments accordingly.
When we re film, we will change her mis en scene, as it can be improved and made to seem more realistic. Also, in the editing process, it is important that we match the sound effects to the action to make it seem more continuous and enhance the narrative, rather than distract the audience.
With this feedback, we will take on board that the credits need to be on screen for and make sure any dialogue is heard, by turning the volume up on their audio in the editing process . Also, we will ensure we keep the shots that work well and possibly add more props if they are accessible.
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