After feedback from sharing our idea with our media class, we realised that our initial idea, with Sarah visiting a doctor about her abnormal behaviour, revealed too much of the plot that should be disclosed in the opening.
Therefore, we changed our opening almost completely, except the foundation of Sarah having paranormal tendencies and the keeping the genre of paranormal.
The idea we concluded with, is Sarah looking at a photo of her and Hannah and as she puts it back on the shelf, it falls off by itself. After this, Sarah begins to act strangely, implying that this is due to the possession by her twin sister, who unexpectedly died. Her mother begins to become worried and texts her husband to confide in him. As she looks up from her phone, Sarah has gone from the garden that she was in and as Mrs Hobbs walks towards the window to search for Sarah, she realises, she is no longer in the garden.
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